Thursday 14 June 2018

My Messy Room

Hi today I made another storybird poem. This time it was about this girls messy room.
P.S the cats name is socks.

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3 comments:

  1. KokaNgaire14 June 2018 at 19:38

    Hi Perle - I really like this poem... it reminds me of my daughter's room! You have definitely painted a picture for your reader. Do you like the poem or the picture book format? Koka Ngaire

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  2. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 11:54

    Bonjour Perle,
    It's Kya here. I thought that your poem was spectacular! I loved all the adjectives you used. They added detail and painted a picture in my mind. Your poem reminds you of my sister's room! Your picture for the background was a good choice because it made the words even more valuable.
    Phenomenal job Perle...
    From Kya WBS

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  3. Anonymous4 June 2019 at 11:50

    Hello Allie,
    I really appreciate your positive feedback. Yes, I did enjoy making it.
    From Perle

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